Comic 135 - Mock-o

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5th Jul 2020, 3:21 PM
Would this have worked better with "show, don't tell"? Would that even be enough? It's hard for me to gauge how well readers could figure out that a snake, who could easily track someone with her tongue, might have to be "tongue-tied" for a fair game of Marco Polo. Hopefully, her words are easy to understand. I pinched my own tongue to test how they'd sound.